Link to the re-write: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/289162/in-the-elven-world/ A man from the future crash-landed to a planet full of medieval, sword swinging, magic casting elves. His arrival ushering in a new age for the locals. Will they adapt, or die? World map(draft): https://ibb.co/T4mTfkL Usual stuff, folks: First time writer, reviews- yes please, criticism welcome and appreciated, English might not be perfect. Also, some feedback would be kinda nice. Not getting any feedback is worse than mistakes and deficiencies being pointed out.